contemplative sorrow

[unwanted]

Oh sorrow, sorrow, borne to me through constant contemplation
I wonder how long I shall be filled with painful indignation
Dipping into joy and hope I found passionate affection
But fear has grasped my heart and soul and I've no mitigation
For words possess no eloquence compared to an embrace
And I would give most anything to gaze upon thy face
For tears of dire distress have rolled this stone in place
And never could my soul exist if outside of your grace

[Mindless Genius]

*puts a wow stamp on it*

[unwanted]

Thanks burns. No one else has commented on it on any site I posted it on... except perhaps my xanga... maybe. Ummmmm... thanks man.

[Mindless Genius]

Well maybe its because its hard to come up with anything else in response to your works other than "its good" maybe if you tried wrting something crappy for a change you'd get a lot more comments. People never hesitate to give negative feedback...we're an evil people us human.

[unwanted]

I'll try writing something crappy for you burns.

[Mindless Genius]

And I'll attempt to call it crappy in as many ways as I can think of.