Post by Mindless Genius on Oct 19, 2004 0:53:00 GMT -5
Here's a sneak peak at the first 5 pages of script for Bloody Fingers. I'm making the strip more "movie like".
A fat women making tea hears a sound. Its dark in the house but she still goes to investigate. She peers into the room finding nothing. Shrugs it off and leaves. A dark figure is shown when she closes the door (Pick). Pick then opens the door and walks through. Next thing heard is a scream.
Cops are called to the scene after neighbors heard screams. They break into the house finding a trail of blood in the hallway leading to the master bedroom. They charge in there and
Cop1: OH GOD!
Cop2: IT’S HORRIBLE!
Cop 2 spews vomit and it breaks to another scene. The daughter (Stacey) is driving up to the house when he sees the cops around the house.
Stacey: What’s going on here! Where’s mom!?
Cop1: I’m sorry… your mothers been killed
Stacey: Noo…<br>Cop1: Also the guy that killed her banged the shit out of her afterwards
Stacey: What!
Cop1: I KNOW! It’s sick isn’t it? We walk into your moms room and he’s working the folds. I don’t even think that he found the vagina.
Stacey: Why are you telling me this!?
Cop1: shrugs Figured I was helping…like.. you’re crying now…and I could give you a shoulder to do it on… Eh? brow raised
Stacey: UGH! Get away from me you sick fuck!
Pick is then escorted out of the house. Handcuffed. Stacey’s and his eyes meet. Smile crosses his face.
Cop2: Shit did he just piss his pants?
Breaks to a courtroom during the afternoon.
Judge: This looks like an open and shut case. The defendant was found on top of the victim… fornicating… With that alone it should be enough evidence to get this “man” if you wish to call him that the death penalty.
Pick: Whoa whoa whoa! You’re not even gonna let anybody defend me! I was drunk I didn’t know what I was doing!
Judge: You killed and committed necrophilia with this woman because you were drunk?
Pick: Well yeah… You see at the time she looked a lot hotter… so honestly you can only say that beers to blame for her sexing up.
Judge: I see…This court finds you guilty and you will be given the highest of Capital Punishment Mr. Pick. The Death Penalty!
New Scene. Stacey’s High School. A group of friends are hanging out together.
Justin: Oh man did you hear about what happened to Stacey’s mom?
Bryce: Yeah heard she was killed then screwed by some psycho. Pretty fucking messed up.
Justin: I know. Stacey’s mom is a cow!
Sarah: Hey! Quit being a jerk! A woman just died.
Justin: You know what really sucks. She was both fat and dead and she still got laid! I’m in my prime of life and I haven’t even made it to first base!
Sarah: Shit Justin, you’re getting envious of a dead woman now? Issues
Bryce: The guy that did it must have been about as desperate for pussy as you. You thinking of going for the big ladies Justin?
Justin: Shut up man! I don’t know how anybody could go for a lard ass like Stacey’s mom let alone myself! When the Cow says moo I say No!
Justin doesn’t realize that Stacey has just shown up behind him.
Stacey: The cow?
Justin: Oh crap sorry Sarah I didn’t realize Stacey kicks him where it hurts OoF!
Bryce: I told him to shut up baby. He just wouldn’t listen to me. I’m so sorry you had to hear that.
Stacey: Thanks Bryce. they hug
Bryce: I’ve been worried about you all day. I can’t stand for you to be by yourself right now.
Stacey: Me neither.
Bryce: So I was thinking that a good way to make sure that we’re together today is to have sex.
Stacey: Huh?
Bryce: I’m not just saying that to get you into bed. Just think of it as like putting me on a leash. I’ll be the dog and you can yank on my leash. That way you’ll know that I’m right there.
Stacey: I’ll pass…but thanks…<br>Sarah: Jeez Bryce can you stop thinking with your dick for even a second. Look at her. She’s depressed as fuck. She couldn’t even change out of her pajamas this morning.
Stacey: I’m not in my pajamas...
Sarah:…oh…well nice effort then.
Stacey: Huh?
Sarah: Nothing… I was thinking that we could have a slumber party tonight. Get your mind focused on more cheery things.
Stacey: I don’t know..
Sarah: You do know and you’re saying yes. Meet me after school and I’ll give you a ride.
Stacey: Ok I guess.
Class Bell Rings and they head off to class. New scene. Its in a class room and the teacher is going over the book Frankenstein
Teacher: Now can anyone tell me why Frankenstein eventually refused to create a bride for the monster?
Student: Its because he couldn’t live with himself if he were to unleash another monster upon the world.
Teacher: Uh… I’m going to have to guess that you weren’t paying attention because I don’t believe anybody could really be that stupid. Frankenstein realized that he was about to help fulfill the greatest act of necrophilia imaginable. Two dead people having sex. Is there anything more heinous than that? This is the theme through out the story. Helping a horny dead guy get laid with a dead woman is wrong. Necrophilia has to be stopped even if it leads to dead bodies of people you care about and that he could evidently have sex with.
What the teacher is saying strikes a cord with Stacey and she runs out of the classroom.
Teacher: Sarah, go after her and see if she’s alright.
Sarah: Alright Ms. Wood
Stacey is just outside the classroom crying.
Sarah: You alright Stacey?
Stacey: sniff Yeah…sorry. What Ms. Wood was saying struck a cord for some reason.
Sarah: You mean because you’re mom just did the dead nasty?
Stacey: whimper yeah
Sarah: If it makes you feel any better the newspapers said that Pick said he didn’t really enjoy it.
Stacey: Pick?
Sarah: Yeah…the psycho that killed you’re mom
Stacey: Pick…
A fat women making tea hears a sound. Its dark in the house but she still goes to investigate. She peers into the room finding nothing. Shrugs it off and leaves. A dark figure is shown when she closes the door (Pick). Pick then opens the door and walks through. Next thing heard is a scream.
Cops are called to the scene after neighbors heard screams. They break into the house finding a trail of blood in the hallway leading to the master bedroom. They charge in there and
Cop1: OH GOD!
Cop2: IT’S HORRIBLE!
Cop 2 spews vomit and it breaks to another scene. The daughter (Stacey) is driving up to the house when he sees the cops around the house.
Stacey: What’s going on here! Where’s mom!?
Cop1: I’m sorry… your mothers been killed
Stacey: Noo…<br>Cop1: Also the guy that killed her banged the shit out of her afterwards
Stacey: What!
Cop1: I KNOW! It’s sick isn’t it? We walk into your moms room and he’s working the folds. I don’t even think that he found the vagina.
Stacey: Why are you telling me this!?
Cop1: shrugs Figured I was helping…like.. you’re crying now…and I could give you a shoulder to do it on… Eh? brow raised
Stacey: UGH! Get away from me you sick fuck!
Pick is then escorted out of the house. Handcuffed. Stacey’s and his eyes meet. Smile crosses his face.
Cop2: Shit did he just piss his pants?
Breaks to a courtroom during the afternoon.
Judge: This looks like an open and shut case. The defendant was found on top of the victim… fornicating… With that alone it should be enough evidence to get this “man” if you wish to call him that the death penalty.
Pick: Whoa whoa whoa! You’re not even gonna let anybody defend me! I was drunk I didn’t know what I was doing!
Judge: You killed and committed necrophilia with this woman because you were drunk?
Pick: Well yeah… You see at the time she looked a lot hotter… so honestly you can only say that beers to blame for her sexing up.
Judge: I see…This court finds you guilty and you will be given the highest of Capital Punishment Mr. Pick. The Death Penalty!
New Scene. Stacey’s High School. A group of friends are hanging out together.
Justin: Oh man did you hear about what happened to Stacey’s mom?
Bryce: Yeah heard she was killed then screwed by some psycho. Pretty fucking messed up.
Justin: I know. Stacey’s mom is a cow!
Sarah: Hey! Quit being a jerk! A woman just died.
Justin: You know what really sucks. She was both fat and dead and she still got laid! I’m in my prime of life and I haven’t even made it to first base!
Sarah: Shit Justin, you’re getting envious of a dead woman now? Issues
Bryce: The guy that did it must have been about as desperate for pussy as you. You thinking of going for the big ladies Justin?
Justin: Shut up man! I don’t know how anybody could go for a lard ass like Stacey’s mom let alone myself! When the Cow says moo I say No!
Justin doesn’t realize that Stacey has just shown up behind him.
Stacey: The cow?
Justin: Oh crap sorry Sarah I didn’t realize Stacey kicks him where it hurts OoF!
Bryce: I told him to shut up baby. He just wouldn’t listen to me. I’m so sorry you had to hear that.
Stacey: Thanks Bryce. they hug
Bryce: I’ve been worried about you all day. I can’t stand for you to be by yourself right now.
Stacey: Me neither.
Bryce: So I was thinking that a good way to make sure that we’re together today is to have sex.
Stacey: Huh?
Bryce: I’m not just saying that to get you into bed. Just think of it as like putting me on a leash. I’ll be the dog and you can yank on my leash. That way you’ll know that I’m right there.
Stacey: I’ll pass…but thanks…<br>Sarah: Jeez Bryce can you stop thinking with your dick for even a second. Look at her. She’s depressed as fuck. She couldn’t even change out of her pajamas this morning.
Stacey: I’m not in my pajamas...
Sarah:…oh…well nice effort then.
Stacey: Huh?
Sarah: Nothing… I was thinking that we could have a slumber party tonight. Get your mind focused on more cheery things.
Stacey: I don’t know..
Sarah: You do know and you’re saying yes. Meet me after school and I’ll give you a ride.
Stacey: Ok I guess.
Class Bell Rings and they head off to class. New scene. Its in a class room and the teacher is going over the book Frankenstein
Teacher: Now can anyone tell me why Frankenstein eventually refused to create a bride for the monster?
Student: Its because he couldn’t live with himself if he were to unleash another monster upon the world.
Teacher: Uh… I’m going to have to guess that you weren’t paying attention because I don’t believe anybody could really be that stupid. Frankenstein realized that he was about to help fulfill the greatest act of necrophilia imaginable. Two dead people having sex. Is there anything more heinous than that? This is the theme through out the story. Helping a horny dead guy get laid with a dead woman is wrong. Necrophilia has to be stopped even if it leads to dead bodies of people you care about and that he could evidently have sex with.
What the teacher is saying strikes a cord with Stacey and she runs out of the classroom.
Teacher: Sarah, go after her and see if she’s alright.
Sarah: Alright Ms. Wood
Stacey is just outside the classroom crying.
Sarah: You alright Stacey?
Stacey: sniff Yeah…sorry. What Ms. Wood was saying struck a cord for some reason.
Sarah: You mean because you’re mom just did the dead nasty?
Stacey: whimper yeah
Sarah: If it makes you feel any better the newspapers said that Pick said he didn’t really enjoy it.
Stacey: Pick?
Sarah: Yeah…the psycho that killed you’re mom
Stacey: Pick…